Improving Paragraphs | Writing | Adjectives | Verbs | Adverbs |

LI: To make improvements to a recount

This week we were learning to improve paragraphs and text. Our task was to choose a paragraph from Messed Up Recount 1 and, individually, add adjectives and other words to change it into an interesting paragraph. We had to color code what we had changed about the paragraph and make an arrow pointing to the part you changed and talk about why you added it. We had to keep the original part of the paragraph and blog post it.