This week for writing we had to fix our family time recount and highlight parts of our writing with colours that symbolise certain parts or structures in our writing.
When we all finished writing, we had to sit and I volunteered to show my work to half of LS1 and mr wong highlighted spaces in my writing, for Structure and language.
Link to my work: Camping
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