I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Friday 25 October 2019
Writing | Recount
Our task was to write a recount with the topic of winning a sport. After we finished writing our recount we had to mark it in 7 different areas. Ideas, S&L, Organization, Vocab, Spelling, Punctuation and Sentence Structure. Then we had to total up our score.
The second part of our task is to make a copy of the sport-winning recount and edit it. We had to change the colour, font or highlight the changes we made. The doc shown is the un-edited document. We had to get feed-back on our un-edited document and my feedback was that the un-edited was all 5's. Here is the link to the edited document.
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