Making Connections

LI:For Reading we had to read an article from kiwi kids news about cycling from the commonwealth games and we had to make text to text,Text to self and text to world connections.My connections may not be enough connections but the teacher said "Never rush your connections,Take your time and read it through" and that s what I did.

Commonwealth games 2018

LI:Today we had to make a DLO/Poster answering the questions the teacher gave us.Today there were only 2 out of 5 people in our group today.The 2 of us worked together.Me and Ellenora.

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Writing Punctuation Fixing

Commas and Apostrophes: Just then ,Goldilocks woke up and saw the three bears. She didn’t want to move. She was afraid, she was face to face with her destroyers’. She nearly passed out. She screamed, “Help!” She jumped up and ran out of the room. Goldilocks ran down the stairs, opened the door and ran away into the forest. And after this she never returned to the home of the three bears. But she wasn’t even sorry for what she had done! She had had a pretty bad time!


Speech Marks:   “This porridge is too hot!” she exclaimed.

So she tasted the porridge from the second bowl.

“This porridge is too cold,” she said.

So she tasted the last bowl of porridge.

“Ahhh, this porridge is just right,” she said happily, and she ate it all up. She thoroughly enjoyed it!

After this she decided she was feeling a little tired. So she walked into the living room where she saw three chairs. Goldilocks sat in the first chair to rest her feet.

“This chair is too big!” she exclaimed.

So she sat in the second chair.

“This chair is too big, too!” she whined.

So she tried the last and smallest chair.

“Ahhh, this chair is just right,” she sighed. But just as she settled down into the chair to rest, it broke into pieces!

Full Stops and Capital Letters:     Once upon a time there was a little girl named Goldilocks she went for a walk in the forest .It was a lovely day you never saw a bluer sky no showers likely. Pretty soon she came upon a house she knocked and when no one answered she walked right in.

At the table in the kitchen there were three bowls of porridge .Goldilocks was hungry, she took a few bites from the first bowl now there were fewer bites than there had been.

Question Marks:Once upon a time there was a little girl named Goldilocks she went for a walk in the forest .It was a lovely day you never saw a bluer sky no showers likely. Pretty soon she came upon a house she knocked and when no one answered she walked right in.

At the table in the kitchen there were three bowls of porridge .Goldilocks was hungry, she took a few bites from the first bowl now there were fewer bites than there had been.

Apostrophes and Commas

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LI:Today we had to do punctuation meanings.We needed to pick different punctuation and write a definition of what you use it for and some examples.I did apostrophes and Commas.I did two different punctuation and thought about my text layout composition and color. I had to watch a video to get some idea about the punctuation i was doing.

Whakatauki,Logo and Motto

LI:To think of a whakatauki that wil represent us and will go with our logo and motto and fit it in a Draw.y group and I did the whakatauki straight away.