Writing | Recount

Our task was to write a recount with the topic of winning a sport. After we finished writing our recount we had to mark it in 7 different areas. Ideas, S&L, Organization, Vocab, Spelling, Punctuation and Sentence Structure. Then we had to total up our score.

The second part of our task is to make a copy of the sport-winning recount and edit it. We had to change the colour, font or highlight the changes we made. The doc shown is the un-edited document. We had to get feed-back on our un-edited document and my feedback was that the un-edited was all 5's. Here is the link to the edited document.